White dove flying in the blue heaven
you look so dazzlingly graceful
I keep on staring at you from my window
before you disappear in distant horizon.
You look so pure and divine with white wings
I see you every day and wonder
is your fate is also like human having white souls?
Do other birds become envious, malicious?
I see not! Your kingdom only acts on few laws
for food, sleep and love.. all the works are done
no other passion invades your earthly minds.
May be this is the price we humans only pay.
For opening the window of our soul and mind
freely without any binding or restrains,
it has invited the good things in this world
and it has invited the bad things inside us.
wild wind blows free
13 years ago
6 comments:
Yeah,,,I completely agree with you.....Nothing much to say [Now wordz needed 4 this}
Mixing nicely done...I liked the conclusion part so much....
cheeerzzz.. :)
waiting for the next post...!!!
td,
thanks, because i have pondered over this point and then accepted my human vices as price of this fantastic brain, its ok, i can control them a lot..:)
i prefer being human.
best wishes,
While you see the purity in the white dove, I struggled with selfishness with My Nightingale =)
Kudos to another wonderful piece.
dear hb,
thanks, where have you disappeared? i logged in in bc today, saw your fantastic achievement.
best of luck,
I was busy at BC, that's why, because I want to be done with it first so that I can focus on other things later. And I have another blog to maintain, many things to write, but no time to spare. I'm so envious that you are able to write so often.
dear bc,
when i start to write something sets free within me, but my poetry is simple, words from heart.
where as your poetries are work of art.
its easy to build a hut but its not easy to build a pyramid.
cheer up girl!!
best wishes,
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