A MESSAGE

Dear friends, I am still firm on NOT USING FACEBOOK, ORKUT, TWITTER and SKYPE. If i ever change my mind I certainly will let you know. Those of you who want to get in touch with me certainly can leave a message in any of my blogs.

I blog to write, I DONT USE MY BLOGS FOR ANY KIND OF COMMERCIAL/BUSINESS PURPOSES . Though just like any persons who writes I too will love to see my works published but ....

I update these three blogspot blogs atleast once a month and the four wordpress blogs almost every day, so any one can check on these blogs to confirm if I am still in blogsphere: http://suryagni.blogspot.com; http://suryakana.blogspot.com; http://agnitrisha.blogspot.com; http://magicthought.wordpress.com; http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com; http://window2mysoul.wordpress.com; http://mycybernovels.wordpress.com ...... sharmishtha basu (25.12.2010)


In the end i will request all my regular readers to just take a look in this piece of writing, so they act a little more cautiously.

http://agnitrisha.blogspot.com/2009/08/trolls.html



Wednesday, May 6, 2009

cruel

You had him for years
but couldnot realize his worth
he tried his best to win you
but it looked as if you have
sworn to Gods to not give in.
He wooed you, begged you for love
pampered you like a queen
nothing could make you love him.

Then finally he gave in
walked away in dark, alone.
even then you did not cared
you thought he will be back himself.
Miracle occurred and he found love,
why is your heart aching now?
Why are you calling him a traitor?
And his lover a home wrecker?

Will you love him if he is back? I guess not!!!

2 comments:

SelfDefinedKing said...

This poem does a great job in accurately depicting the mentality of some woman. i have personally dealt with a situation like this...as soon as i left her thats when she started to appreciate me. That shows you that people can relate to the stories you tell through your poetry.

thoughts said...

Dear SD,
My poems are based on real life experiences or to stories which have been told as real stories to me, i sometimes add mythical characters to blunt the harsh reality.
thanks for liking this particular one because it was my personal point of view, seen a few characters like this myself.
with best wishes,