A MESSAGE

Dear friends, I am still firm on NOT USING FACEBOOK, ORKUT, TWITTER and SKYPE. If i ever change my mind I certainly will let you know. Those of you who want to get in touch with me certainly can leave a message in any of my blogs.

I blog to write, I DONT USE MY BLOGS FOR ANY KIND OF COMMERCIAL/BUSINESS PURPOSES . Though just like any persons who writes I too will love to see my works published but ....

I update these three blogspot blogs atleast once a month and the four wordpress blogs almost every day, so any one can check on these blogs to confirm if I am still in blogsphere: http://suryagni.blogspot.com; http://suryakana.blogspot.com; http://agnitrisha.blogspot.com; http://magicthought.wordpress.com; http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com; http://window2mysoul.wordpress.com; http://mycybernovels.wordpress.com ...... sharmishtha basu (25.12.2010)


In the end i will request all my regular readers to just take a look in this piece of writing, so they act a little more cautiously.

http://agnitrisha.blogspot.com/2009/08/trolls.html



Tuesday, May 12, 2009

Soul traders

An innocent soul trapped in
the quagmire of darkest sins,
she dropped down on her knees
every night, and prayed to Gods
that she be delivered from the
hell which has become her life.
Every night a kind angel will
appear and promise her God’s love.

Then one night another angel in
dark robe visited her in dreams
he promised her Garden of Eden
in return of two innocent souls
she was so tired of that hell
that she promised him to do it
and did it as soon as she could,
she pulled down two souls in hell.

That night when she prayed to God
to keep His promise as she has kept.
Her angel appeared with tears in her
eyes and told her she has traded her
soul to Devil. She told her that God
can never ask her to harm someone.
How could she be fooled by the syrupy
words of the darkest soul trader?

3 comments:

HoneyBee said...

Oh dear... I suppose when you're desperate anything goes.

BTW, I'm amazed with the speed and enthusiasm of your blogging. Such diligence is really admirable. You must be spilling and bursting with ideas. All the more reason that I included your blog in my blogroll =)

Keep writing and enlightening us! Cheers!

thoughts said...

dear honey bee,

i am not a talented writer but i love to write, and with my vast reading experience i can prepare a readable thing.

i have contributed in msn's reader's archive for two years.. articles and stories..my only theme was human beings. i think they have quota so from the start of this year i noticed that they are not publishing my articles any more.

in the meantime i have swiched to poetry, and then and now the base of my work is/was real life stories. so idea is hardly a problem, and nor is time, because i am unmarried and i am not a career woman. writing is my main hobby and i have lots of leisure time, which is your main problem.

i too am happy to have a friend who reads my scribbles seriously.

this poem is based on a real life story and have read such stories stated as true one later, being a woman you must have read between the lines and discarded the mythical creatures and replaced them with real ones.

best wishes,

Rohini said...

i really liked the idea & concept behind this poem..i like the tiny bird one too..keep it up..keep me updated about new poems..my link is http://revelationswithin.blogspot.com
take care