Hey mastadons don’t you have some
other thing to do but jump in ponds
full of crystal clear water and flowers
blooming with loving glory and charm?
Hey mastadons this is the realm of poetry
its not made for elephants who will rip
every flower and assess its anatomy
and tresspass without knowing own territory.
An elephant cant understand the charm
of serene, peaceful calm of a pond.
Its not their fault its nature’s irony.
But hey! Cant you stay away from ponds?
You can jump into the rivers or ocean
where there is nothing to ruin
why ruin some poor guy’s pond?
when there are so many rivers and oceans?
wild wind blows free
13 years ago
8 comments:
But some people just don't learn or don't understand how they spoil things for others. Truly, barbaric indeed.
BTW, when I checked on the definition of your poem title, the spelling given to me is mastOdon instead of mastAdon. Can you clarify on this?
Oh my, this is a blast Trisha. I feel the energy, definitely,:-)
dear hb,
yes, some people dont understand and never forget to leave pinching comments :)
with warmest wishes,
dear hb,
checked mastadon, its correct, its a prehistoric hairy elephant :) i picked up this word from asterix comicses. love them.
bestest wishes,
dear lj,
i knew you would like it, :)
like i liked your extremely witty punchline.
with bestest wishes,
I agree to honey bee's comment....some people don't understand it....hmmm....
but mastadons will also have "Mastadons" in their life...he he :-)
gud comparison...!!!
keep up the work..!!!
hey,
i have seen it in real life, bullies always end up with bigger bullies. it must be something psychological.. but they always do!!
:) loved the punchline!!
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