Go back undead go back to your crypt
go back in that dark place of rest
and resume your eternal sleep
she doesnot belongs to you or there.
You got tempted by her innocent youth
made a pact with her lusty kins
promising heaven in return of that youth
they failed to make her bow to you.
You returned from the door of heaven
unsatisfied still lusting for her
she was sleeping blissfully in her
lover’s arm, perfect picture of youth.
You stole her lover’s body but failed
to hide your shrivelled soul
soon your game was caught and
she backed away from you .
Don’t you realise the truth evil undead
your gnarled hands don’t look good
placed upon those lotus hands
nor does your dark soul beside the white.
Go back to sleep evil undead and pray
to God that he forgives your lust
and lets you enter in his domain
forgiven, cleansed and chastised.
wild wind blows free
13 years ago
8 comments:
You are trying something different here, aren't you? I love this one very much! Very dark, very intense! Well done, you! Keep writing!!!
Beautifully dark yet hinting at salvation. Bravo!
dear ajey,
these two poems were written in early 2009.
i have changed after that :)
yes it was very intense, that is why i have been toying with the idea whether to share it or not..
its based on a legendary ghost story, i only changed the morbid end.
warmest wishes.
dear gerry,
it is very, very dark, that is why it took months to decide, whether to share it or not..
yes, i gave a positive ending to a legendary ghost story..
warmest wishes,
It's a vampire!
That's my first thought =)
Hope you have more on the Dark side.
dear hb,
i have some more but will have to muster the courage to publish them. :)
the story in gist was a corrupted old man fell for his nephew's fiance, and made a pact with him that he will have her soul. the boy agreed and the man came back, possessed him and killed the girl.. can we call him vampire? guess not.
warmest wishes,
trisha
Ok, I guess I misunderstood it. Been reading too much vampire stuffs lately =)
dear hb,
if u r a great admirer of horror stories (like i am) you can try insomnia by stephen king.
loved it.
warmest wishes,
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