Who am I? just a child of God like you
Your very own, I too worship the same God
Only in some other form, and just like you
I too pray for food, shelter and clothe for all.
What do I love? In this beautiful world?
Let me think, the smile on a baby’s face
Flowers, gardens, sky, clouds and butterflies
Music, love, friends, any thing with beauty.
My religion? To love every harmless soul
Feel compassion for every living being
Never play God even when I am wronged
Never to hit back unless pushed in corner.
What do I hope? A permanent place in your heart
An entire life of friendship with you
We will fly together forever, in the blue skies
Full of love, peace and harmony everlasting
wild wind blows free
13 years ago
10 comments:
Hi... I read the long note... I dont know if I am a serious blogger... I may have foul language on my blog... so it may not be a blog that you would want to visit... I don't even know if I can help you develop... In all probability... I cant... But I have still mustered the courage to write a comment... because I liked your writing...
All the best... keep writing...
Wonderful! You see, I love the Q&A style of writing in poetry and/or songs. This poem also carries that conversational style of expression. I liked it. Keep writing!!!
You poetry is peaceful and is just what I needed after a busy day! I look forward to reading more of your words.
I loved the connection that you have made with your readers. I felt a sense of welcome, of peace, and of friendship. It is beautiful. Thank you
Hi Trisha,
Reading this exquisitely penned poem is a privilege, :-).
Keep on writing girl, :-)
All the best,
Leofina Jane
dear amm,
usually i think its basic manners to check the blogs of those people who are sweet and kind enough to check yours, but there are all type of people with all type of taste, and every one is not for everyone, that is why thats an alibi, advance apology.
i will check your blog for sure. :)
if i dont re check it then...
best wishes,
dear bros,
thanks a lot. actually i dont follow any style at all, i have read your works they are fantastic.
writing is purely my hobby, and passion.
thanks again,
best wishes,
dear andrea,
thats the greatest compliment any one can receive i believe.
i will keep that in mind (but some of my works are pretty grim too,i just paint life in my poems, sometimes mine, sometimes others)
thanks again,
best wishes,
dear b,
its a great joy to share your works with likeminded people, otherwise half joy goes out of writing.
thanks for reading and the beautiful remark,
best wishes.
dear lj,
and reading your paintings with word is equivalent to a piece of heaven to me.
with warmest wishes and thanks,
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