A MESSAGE

Dear friends, I am still firm on NOT USING FACEBOOK, ORKUT, TWITTER and SKYPE. If i ever change my mind I certainly will let you know. Those of you who want to get in touch with me certainly can leave a message in any of my blogs.

I blog to write, I DONT USE MY BLOGS FOR ANY KIND OF COMMERCIAL/BUSINESS PURPOSES . Though just like any persons who writes I too will love to see my works published but ....

I update these three blogspot blogs atleast once a month and the four wordpress blogs almost every day, so any one can check on these blogs to confirm if I am still in blogsphere: http://suryagni.blogspot.com; http://suryakana.blogspot.com; http://agnitrisha.blogspot.com; http://magicthought.wordpress.com; http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com; http://window2mysoul.wordpress.com; http://mycybernovels.wordpress.com ...... sharmishtha basu (25.12.2010)


In the end i will request all my regular readers to just take a look in this piece of writing, so they act a little more cautiously.

http://agnitrisha.blogspot.com/2009/08/trolls.html



Friday, June 26, 2009

Invisible hand

the pond was serene, the crystal water sparkling
in the morning sun, the fishes were playing
lotus blooming in rising glory of morning sun.
all of a sudden every thing went wrong.

The water got muddy, the fishes disappeared
the pond was no longer holding the sun
in its heart, the water got murky, only the sun
stayed as it was watching it all from the heaven.
Watching through muddy waters, missing calm.

Sit down visitor, wait for a little while
don’t think that it was this way always.
Pause, think and look for the invisible hand
which pelted the stone, destroyed the calm
then ran away without being seen by any one.

May be he did it just for fun, or may be because
his unhappy heart hated the peaceful calm.

4 comments:

Opaque said...

Beautiful! Nice imagery here! And, a thought-provoking message within. What more could one ask for in a poem? Nicely done! Keep writing!!!

thoughts said...

dear ajey,
its a very serious thought dipped, dipped and dipped again in sugar to make it as sweet as possible.. thats the advantage of switching to lyre from pen. :) :)
i am a very straight forward person.
with warmest wishes,

thoughtful delights :-) said...

Dear Thought,

Great work indeed....

these type of people can alwayz be seen in our day to day life...

Is that Unhappy heart a Sadist..???

Keep Up the work....

cheeerzz....

thoughts said...

dear td,
unfortunately i too cant understand them, i think they are sadists who get happiness out of snuffing others happieness.
a friend of mine said a fabulous thing "stop them when you can" i also follow him.
:)