As you stand on the threshhold my child
the border of leaving my home and
joining the home of your loved one
let me share some thoughts
from mother to daughter
First thing you will receive there
is love and adoration my child
every one will greet you with a smile
and every heart will warm up at you.
It will be your duty, your luck, your goal
to keep that light shining in those eyes,
keep that warmth glowing in those hearts.
Just keep in mind child its not easy to keep
light shining in so many eyes and
warmth pouring down from so many hearts.
You will have to take your extra steps
and leave your door of heart open forever.
If your eyes are shining bright with love
and your heart is pouring out unselfish warmth
rare souls will be able to resist you and your charm.
wild wind blows free
13 years ago
5 comments:
Hell0 Trisha,
Haha I'm glad you joined the group.
Thanks for visiting my site. I still have finish my next post...
I find your style rare...
..PEACE.......
hmmm ... is that Love? or a need to belong?
Dear selbon,
Thanks again, you sure are a great inspiration. :)
actually i rarely use beautiful words or classic english, that is why my poems are a little different i believe.
i am eagerly waiting for your next post, try to publish atleast one a week :( they are fantastic.
with best wishes,
trisha
dear fantasia,
My works are based on different human emotions, this one is the suggestions a mother is giving to her daughter who is going away to live with her in-laws.
in India married women often live with their inlaws life long, of course along with her husband and children, keeping that picture in mind, this poem is written.
to win the love of so many persons and keeping it is not a easy job, but i have seen my sister in laws doing it.
with best wishes,
trisha
fantasia,
took a peek in your blog, but had to come back :( i am too old fashioned. :(
best wishes girl,
trisha
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