A MESSAGE

Dear friends, I am still firm on NOT USING FACEBOOK, ORKUT, TWITTER and SKYPE. If i ever change my mind I certainly will let you know. Those of you who want to get in touch with me certainly can leave a message in any of my blogs.

I blog to write, I DONT USE MY BLOGS FOR ANY KIND OF COMMERCIAL/BUSINESS PURPOSES . Though just like any persons who writes I too will love to see my works published but ....

I update these three blogspot blogs atleast once a month and the four wordpress blogs almost every day, so any one can check on these blogs to confirm if I am still in blogsphere: http://suryagni.blogspot.com; http://suryakana.blogspot.com; http://agnitrisha.blogspot.com; http://magicthought.wordpress.com; http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com; http://window2mysoul.wordpress.com; http://mycybernovels.wordpress.com ...... sharmishtha basu (25.12.2010)


In the end i will request all my regular readers to just take a look in this piece of writing, so they act a little more cautiously.

http://agnitrisha.blogspot.com/2009/08/trolls.html



Saturday, February 27, 2010

Divine touch

I saw you in my dreams
you were sitting there
a beautiful painting in colours
red, yellow, blue and steel..

You sat there singing sweetly
your small being glowing
with beauty and divine rhythm
I could hear your sweet melody.

Then I saw something ominous
crawling, slithering toward you
I saw the jaws of a serpent
as it was about to strike you.

I tried to scream but could not
my voice was sucked deep
then to my ecstassy you flew
far away from those fangs.

As if someone from up above
warned you about unseen
and you meekly obeyed her
without even once looking back.

6 comments:

Dulçe ♥ said...

BEautiful
These drems which leave us unmoved or unable to move but let us observe such scenarios...
Great work, dear- as always!

thoughts said...

dear dulce,
thanks. dreams are really strange.
with lots of affection,

Opaque said...

I love the "as if" here. Good work!

PS: I have been on vacation. Sorry for not commenting so far.

Bernadine said...

Wow. This is so beautiful and painted so vividly. And wonderful how you mixed the descriptions of 'good' and 'evil' so boldly.

thoughts said...

dear ajey,
i checked your blog a few days back. loved your poems. they are so very powerful.
hope you enjoyed your vacation.
with warmest affections,

thoughts said...

dear bernadine,
i am glad that you liked it.
with lots of affection,