I saw you in my dreams
you were sitting there
a beautiful painting in colours
red, yellow, blue and steel..
You sat there singing sweetly
your small being glowing
with beauty and divine rhythm
I could hear your sweet melody.
Then I saw something ominous
crawling, slithering toward you
I saw the jaws of a serpent
as it was about to strike you.
I tried to scream but could not
my voice was sucked deep
then to my ecstassy you flew
far away from those fangs.
As if someone from up above
warned you about unseen
and you meekly obeyed her
without even once looking back.
wild wind blows free
13 years ago
6 comments:
BEautiful
These drems which leave us unmoved or unable to move but let us observe such scenarios...
Great work, dear- as always!
dear dulce,
thanks. dreams are really strange.
with lots of affection,
I love the "as if" here. Good work!
PS: I have been on vacation. Sorry for not commenting so far.
Wow. This is so beautiful and painted so vividly. And wonderful how you mixed the descriptions of 'good' and 'evil' so boldly.
dear ajey,
i checked your blog a few days back. loved your poems. they are so very powerful.
hope you enjoyed your vacation.
with warmest affections,
dear bernadine,
i am glad that you liked it.
with lots of affection,
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